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12-22-2001, 11:58 PM
:D okay, you may recognise this. This is former abstract 1 upside down. I added a few darker stokes and addeda couple of token dribbles of paint down the right hand side. (:o I dont suppose they look like token dribbles of paint do they?:o ) Please critique. mjk

12-30-2001, 10:22 AM
It's a good abstract, but it just doesn't appeal to me for some reason..... I think i would like it better if someone had just brushed over it and blended all the colors together. Just a thought though ;)

12-30-2001, 12:24 PM
Hi mj,

I enjoy this a lot. I see lots of birds in flight throught this work. I also like the drips along the right side.

Did you have fun doing this? I think that's one of the most important elements. To me, it looks like you enjoyed yourself.

I hope you show us more of your work.

Happy 2002!


12-30-2001, 03:36 PM
wonderful colours, mjkohler... great variety of brushstrokes... kinda festive and tropical :) ... mayb more of those dribbles throughout the whole painting might lessen the impression that someone spilled juice on the top right corner by accident :D

12-30-2001, 09:02 PM

12-30-2001, 11:13 PM
i like i like, so nice to find more of your work here...