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jimmy craig
02-02-2005, 11:44 AM
These are from a digital video camera. Don't know how they will look.

This is my first offering to y'all. Would like any input you can give. The subject is backlit with glare from the ocean. I don't know if water is working, and the sand will probably be lightened a little. Thanks for viewing, jimmy craig

Spyderbabe
02-02-2005, 12:19 PM
Its looks like its working real well. Water and shadows look good. What size is this?

jimmy craig
02-02-2005, 01:29 PM
Hi, thanks for looking. The panel is 24x36".

Quiet
02-02-2005, 01:48 PM
I really like your composition. The negative spaces are rythmic and musical. Iím impressed that youíve managed to take a subject that consists largely of horizontal lines and present it in a way that isnít compositionally dull. The combination of the heavy mass of the building, the diagonal wave on the beach and the vertical lines all balance out those horizontals well.

Itís looking great, and Iím very curious to see what else you will do with it.

jimmy craig
02-03-2005, 08:14 AM
Thank you Quiet for looking. I'll be interested to see where it ends up also. :)