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dornberg
01-18-2005, 04:48 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/01-18-2005/3105_zsp6.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: junker
Year Created: 2005
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 16x20 in.
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
local color

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
too obvious?

jerryW
01-18-2005, 05:01 PM
no but the flesh color makes me wonder about myself.

Wayne Gaudon
01-18-2005, 05:21 PM
simply smashing

Spyderbabe
01-18-2005, 05:29 PM
This is why a day with new Dornbergs is such a treat.

VanArt
01-18-2005, 08:57 PM
I am new to painting but, I think this painting I wonderful. You have such freedom in your brush strokes. I do not think it is too obvious and the greens are great! :)

Tamana
01-18-2005, 10:02 PM
too obvious?

Nnnnnnnnnnnnnn yes. But not too. It's exquisite and my favorite of the bunch. Green and yellow and red oh my!!! Green and yellow and red....Just gorgeous. I'd like some details on this one - the green; the distant fence area (including the smudge of green above it); and that yellow commingling of color on that car.

jerryW
01-18-2005, 11:26 PM
the yellow tufts rising in fornt of the car
the yellow peeking out of the fence behind
this is a very powerful spatial work
besides the allegorical metaphorical etc..

waaay coool

dornberg
01-18-2005, 11:42 PM
Nnnnnnnnnnnnnn yes. But not too. It's exquisite and my favorite of the bunch. Green and yellow and red oh my!!! Green and yellow and red....Just gorgeous. I'd like some details on this one - the green; the distant fence area (including the smudge of green above it); and that yellow commingling of color on that car.

Foil
01-18-2005, 11:42 PM
Well, since I gave you a somewhat negative review of "appointment" I thought it would only be fair to comment here as well. I really like this one a lot. I like the way me eye flows through the painting, from the car to the roof to the bush and back again. For some reason I also really like the stroke of green just above the roof of the car. This one almost inspires me enough to get up off my butt and start a painting which has not happened in quite a long time. Thanks!

haaf
01-19-2005, 04:27 AM
It's a joy following all the colorconnections in this work
The light yellow naples in combo with that emerald is pure pleasure for the eyes.
Caroline ;)

Tamana
01-20-2005, 08:58 AM
OMG!! Thank you!! :clap:

giniaad
01-20-2005, 12:23 PM
:) :) :)