WIP Help

[nancyl746]

MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/01-13-2005/54789_Bestest_Buddie_600.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/01-13-2005/54789_pastel1.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: WIP Help
Year Created: 2005
Medium: Pastel
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 16X20
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
I am not quite happpy with this and am not sure why. I deliberately lightened left side shadows


MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
If you would give me solutions please

[Mikey]

Hi Nancy, it always up to the artist, but I'd consider keeping his left side dark and loosening up.

Mikey

[Dana Design]

Hi, Nancy,
I'm placing this in the WIP thread at the top of the Open Critique Forum page.

All WIPs go there and you're more likely to get additional help!

Happy painting!

[Gilberte]

echoing Mikey's opinion :)