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pucci
12-28-2004, 02:02 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-28-2004/41095_Picture_192.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: EAST SIDE
Year Created: 2004
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 16 x 20
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This goes with my west side painting- next- dirty south.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
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Frida200
12-28-2004, 06:13 AM
I checked out the west side painting first...
so this is number two in your "a series about people who are having an apparent identity crisis" ?
Interesting idea, like it!!!

In this painting, I am not too sure about the shadow on her belly?
Other than that, I like it very much, especially the choice of colors, and that unreal 'glow' she has.

Curious to see the next one!

Claudia

jerryW
12-28-2004, 03:53 PM
text saying east side
is not essential
picture works better without the text

Tamana
12-28-2004, 09:11 PM
East End girls West End Boys? ;)

The painting seems dark on my monitor, but my monitor is a bit darker than most. It's a great expression and pose. I particularly like the blow-fly neon green there and that yellow. The black outline seems too thick for the outline and distracts in a way -- definitely agree about the navel tattoo.