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Anonymous
12-08-2004, 04:58 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-08-2004/6813_fix.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: First Table
Year Created: 2004
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 18 x 24
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
My first try with acrylics and a table.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Any tips?:)

haaf
12-08-2004, 05:28 PM
Hi
Lots to like here
I see some Kandinsky like shapes here
in a French Cezanne ,Matisse like setting.
colors nicely thrown around the whole canvas
Good composition
Tip? yes, do more of these
Caroline ;)

jerryW
12-08-2004, 05:29 PM
stop
you making me too happy

bloodjelly
12-08-2004, 07:46 PM
No tips really - I'm not a big painter - but I like what you've done with the colors and perspective. I almost wish for just a little more definition of edges and shapes, but I don't know if that would hurt the painting or help it. Anyway good job on your first try especially.

Tamana
12-08-2004, 09:47 PM
o O A LOVELY evening...that yellow candle-light glows so warm...I wonder where the people are? On the floor dancing, no doubt. That yellow is just so pleasant...

dornberg
12-08-2004, 11:36 PM
i think the composition is attractive

shirleyq
12-09-2004, 03:43 AM
So much to love here. Colors are well placed, yellows are luminous, composition leads you around, around, around and never out. Wonderful. :)

LisaArt
12-09-2004, 03:47 AM
I really like Vivid colours and it is nice composition.
I agree with Caroline, Do more.. :)

cadman
12-09-2004, 10:14 AM
What Jerry said, but don't stop.

Mikey
12-09-2004, 01:53 PM
I too love the colours. It looks as if you had a great time with acrylics first time out, painting lights over dark. Has the new medium given you fresh inspiration? I don't know what you used before this.

Mikey

Gilberte
12-09-2004, 02:05 PM
Compliments on the complements.