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northcoast
12-02-2004, 12:35 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-01-2004/51767_BalloonRace.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Whitewater Balloon Race
Year Created: 2004
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 24x36
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
About 1/2 done. The blobs on the right will be the hot air balloons.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Does the perspective look correct? Does the mass of water below the falls look too large for the top portion of water? (assuming some activity off canvas to the left). All other comments welcome - especially about composition.

LisaArt
12-02-2004, 04:00 AM
Hi This is looking very good. Nice comp, and Great texture. You have done a wonderful job on the falls. I cant comment yet on the balloons..Anxious to see them finsihed.

Does the mass of water below the falls look too large for the top portion of water? A little, but I dont think personally it is a big issue and the baloons are not finished, so I find it hard to tell at the moment.
Will you add a little reflection of color from the balloons on the water? Just a thought that might be nice, to add a little more colour to the water.