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dornberg
11-18-2004, 02:58 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/11-18-2004/3105_zsm7.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: fenced-calif
Year Created: 2004
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 16x20 in.
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
color range

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
area divisions obvious?

Mybubblewall
11-18-2004, 03:04 PM
Area Divisions:

First Glance (left to right, top to bottom)
Thick hedge, steps, fence, sky, distant field, more fence, close lawn.

I'm really enjoying the left side of the piece, the contrasting sunlight, the dramatic perspective of the fence, very nice. The right half doesn't capture my attention at all, almost seems like a space filler...

Sorry to be brutally honest, just first impressions. Enjoying your loose style and vivid colors. Keep going with this, exciting!

haaf
11-18-2004, 04:15 PM
like a sunny windy Californian day, bordering a golf course
great colors
little bit of a Vuillard garden perspective
Caroline ;)

Tamana
11-18-2004, 09:52 PM
Yes the divisions are obvious - gorgeous play of sunlight juxtaposed with the heavy shade.

The fence is excellent.

jerryW
11-18-2004, 10:01 PM
I could eat those shadows for dinner.
or desert
you can tell me which way is up i am enchanted

allanom
11-19-2004, 01:34 AM
My heart bursts from the variety and verve of colour and the unnerring comprehension and creative use of chiaroscuro. Awesome piece.

ordie4
11-19-2004, 10:26 AM
personally, this i
my favorite of the
cali pics. i love the
dark shadows to the
left and the
more whimsical
colors to the right.
it works well for my taste