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jonesbf
10-31-2004, 12:37 PM
Here is the new one Commission Piece (http://www.ghargoyle.com/images/footholdcommission.jpg).

It is a new version of: Foot Hold (http://www.ghargoyle.com/images/foothold.jpg ) with a slightly different mood and more refinement. I went with deeper colors and a more definite "rock" look in the foreground. I've also left out the white caps in the water and the birds in the sky, but I'm considering putting them in.

What do you guys think? Is it finished? Does it need the additions? Is it missing something else?

Thanks,

Bertoni
10-31-2004, 01:57 PM
I think the newest one has a more dramatic look than the first!
The sky is so much better and one or two birds might work, but not as many as in the first painting! Like it a lot! :clap: