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11-05-2001, 02:36 PM
"Si Tu N'etais Pas La"
11-05-2001, 03:00 PM
i like the composition and the bright bold colors :cool:
11-23-2001, 07:36 AM
Your colours are striking :)
I like it.
11-23-2001, 04:40 PM
Hi, I like it alot. Great colors, I have been trying to dream up something like this to do but no success yet. I think it's very Piccaso;ish. Very cool.
11-23-2001, 04:49 PM
awesome, there is a lot of feeling in the spiral dance...great colors and just my kinda art...
huge fan of the pen and ink. has to do with the figure emerging from the background, rather than competing with it. also, as I have mentioned before, I am more into muddier colors than bright ones. a personal preference is all.
12-17-2001, 07:09 AM
Wonderful colors, wonderful composition!
Re first image. This is what I was talking about re composition.
Figure not centered but balanced with diagonal and rhythm of repeated circle objects.
Here's the criticism - the look of straight out of the tube color and no variation in outlining everything and lack of variety in soft/hard lines lends a cartoonishness, lack of sophistication. A bad thing? Not necessarily. Think "edges".
Just my observations. Take what I say with a grain of salt.
12-19-2001, 12:28 AM
I very rarely ever get the chance to cruise around and comment on posted art - but tonight I had a little extra time on my hands. Which means I'm also wholly unqualified to give too much insights into the composition - but I know what I like - and I like this.
I dig the bold colors and lines in the first piece. I am especially fond of folks who use complementary colors in shadow, as you did with the face, and othe areas (red/green, yellow/blue). It harmonizes well for my eyes.
I assume the pen/ink and the other piece were studies for the larger image?
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