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Spyderbabe
09-18-2004, 11:23 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-18-2004/23281_pond.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Pond - Cuyahoga Valley
Year Created: 2004
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 8 x 10
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Tamed it down a bit for ths last one of the day.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Anything

Tamana
09-19-2004, 08:19 AM
Though I still see Kathleen, and I do like the tranquility the piece suggests (love the soft butter sky), I'm left lacking on this one compared to viewing your other two. I keep looking for some chops and textures and bold loose application extending beyond the cattails...

sugar tree gal
09-19-2004, 10:53 AM
Kathleen ,I love the way you paint, so loose and free.. this is great..Janice

Spyderbabe
09-19-2004, 11:31 AM
Tamana - sometimes a girl has got to settle down :D A lot of this is just me saying,"what will happen if I do this" Believe it or not I started out playing with cast shadows on grass and then this pond appeared.....

Thanks Janice - sometimes I think loose and free and more to do with being impatient! I once tried quilting - I could never do anything so exacting. My instructor wanted us to cut out each piece one by one. I was folding the fabric in order to cut out 8 at a time. Although I did get a bit caught up in the grasses here.

sugar tree gal
09-19-2004, 02:34 PM
Kathleen, i can relate to that.. I tried painting some jewelry once, that drove me crazy, give me a BIG brush.. and let me have at it...Janice :clap:

Gilberte
09-19-2004, 02:36 PM
The way you broke up the greens is excellent ...

Michael-Ann
09-19-2004, 03:42 PM
This is excellent greens and butter-golden-yellows. My favorite little detail of this, are the evergreens on the horizon viewer-left...so cool how you did the light breaking them apart and yet they are without question evergreens.

Wayne Gaudon
09-20-2004, 04:46 AM
love the rock ..

Spyderbabe
09-21-2004, 11:16 AM
Wayne - the rock was a happy afterthought - done with a knife :p
Michael Ann - thansk...are there enought trees there?
Gilberte - you spotted the original trouble spots... I went back more than once to highlight and darken those greens
Sugar Tree Gal :wave: I agree!

YLCIA
09-21-2004, 01:36 PM
The way you broke up the greens is excellent ...

I am with Gilberte :)

Julia