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CarolAnn
09-07-2004, 01:54 PM
This is a new piece I'm finishing up. Not sure what else to change but I don't feel done yet. I want to clean up some of the lines and touch up some things but seem to like the balance. Any suggestions or comments welcomed? This is a 30 x 40 inch oil on canvas.

Michael-Ann
09-07-2004, 01:57 PM
You made it look like so much fun! Now I have to find someone to kiss ASAP! ;) Great lines and fantastic work!

Roger100
09-07-2004, 02:38 PM
a feel good painting, f'sure.

one little, teeny, tiny, thang--the gal's yellow teeth...but that's just me.

MountainSong
09-07-2004, 03:23 PM
Such a happy joyful piece! Neat style, good rendering.

CarolAnn
09-07-2004, 03:43 PM
Yes, my art tends to be more psychological and less cheerful usually. However, this was made as a gift to my new husband. Here is the original photograph that the painting was created from.

hans.kok
09-07-2004, 04:02 PM
Yes, my art tends to be more psychological and less cheerful usually. However, this was made as a gift to my new husband. Here is the original photograph that the painting was created from.

Hm... and I thought psychology was mostly about... :evil:
Congratulations, by the way, the two of you look very happy and that feeling radiates also from your wonderful painting.
Hans

themanda
09-07-2004, 04:34 PM
how sweet! i also like your color balance in this. the whole piece is so evenly weighted.

i'd like to see just a teeny bit of definition on his lower lip. otherwise i think it's great!

CarolAnn
09-07-2004, 04:37 PM
I'll keep the lower lip definition in mind as I clean this one up more. Thank you all for your nice comments.

As for the yellow teeth, I don't want any more white in this area so they'll have to stay yellow for me. I'm OK with that, but understand the Yellow/dirty teeth thing. Hopefully you and other's won't get hung up on that as most of the colors in the piece are not true to life.

Smileawhyl
09-07-2004, 07:29 PM
lovely happy picture

lovely happy people

lovely happy painting! :D

Mirek Sledz
09-07-2004, 07:59 PM
I can only repeat this words: happy picture, happy people,happy painting :)

Tamana
09-07-2004, 09:16 PM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww luuurrrrrrrrrrrve is in the air!!!

I think the colors definitely capture your auras :) I'll be watching to see where to take it. Or rather, where it takes you. ;)

CarolAnn
01-24-2005, 02:52 PM
What do you think?