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10-15-2001, 10:04 PM
I found this a frustrating piece to draw. I find that when doing illustration, I find myself drawing things as I "know" they are - symbolically, kinda - rather than the way they are. Things I know of: her face could have been better, and her right foot is screwy.

Comments, critiques, etc?


10-16-2001, 03:16 AM
Your proportion and contrast is good, but I think you might want to clean up the edges around the outline of the figure. It would make it look more crisp and defined. Typically you don't want a loose sketchy feel when doing illustrations of this sort. Also, the cape is not right. It seems flat and rigid. Perhaps using more contrast in that area would give it depth and perspective. Other than that, I think you did a really great job. Let's see more like it.