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jyvonne
07-16-2004, 07:59 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-16-2004/43486_flipped.JPG

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-16-2004/43486_july2004_531.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-16-2004/43486_july_2004_004.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Mountain Cougar re-made
Year Created: 2004
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 11
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Well, here it goes. I submitted my mountain cougar a few days ago for some suggestions. I was totally frustrated by this poor animal at that point.

After reading your helpful replies, I re-did the fur: focusing on depth and painting "fur"- not "hair".

By the way... I still haven't put on the whiskers. I always wait to do that at the end.

I'm posting the photo, first attempt, and the re-worked piece here.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Before I put on those whiskers and finish my work, I wonder... is there anything in this picture that jumps out at you as needing change that my inexperienced eye may be missing?