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futurebird
07-16-2004, 05:08 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-16-2004/11505_newjersy.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-16-2004/11505_bigdoors.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Two new ones: "NJ" and "Writing"
Year Created: 2004
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Watercolor Paper
Dimension: 10 inch wide
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This first one is rather conventional and boring-- But I had fun doing it...
The second one is from riverside park

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
What works? What's not working...

Gilberte
07-17-2004, 04:04 PM
I like the second one best for its originality.

jerryW
07-17-2004, 05:12 PM
I like the second one best for its originality.
the second uses the canvas very well
the first could be stronger if the white below pushed up the tree more boldly and definitively and if the ground pushed down over the white more - it has some clever ideas

stephanf
07-17-2004, 06:34 PM
agree with all comments including yours...

if study for a painting #2 make bigger