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futurebird
07-15-2004, 03:09 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-15-2004/11505_mirhand.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: winter sunlight
Year Created: 2004
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Watercolor Paper
Dimension: 10 inch wide
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
I used gold leaf too.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
All comments and crits welcome.

Gilberte
07-15-2004, 03:02 PM
The hand draws all my attention, maybe too much difference in value ?

Mikey
07-16-2004, 08:18 AM
I agree with Gilberte part of the way, but that hand seems to say we are just looking at a surface.

Mikey

Wayne Gaudon
07-16-2004, 08:32 AM
nice concept .. perhaps a ring on the finger that parralles the ring around the picture would tie the two pieces .. I'm grasping here but maybe even the gleam of the ring pointing to the picture ..

futurebird
07-16-2004, 05:05 PM
nice concept .. perhaps a ring on the finger that parralles the ring around the picture would tie the two pieces .. I'm grasping here but maybe even the gleam of the ring pointing to the picture ..

Not a bad idea!

haaf
07-16-2004, 06:08 PM
yes, I was exactly thinking like Wayne's suggestion.
Interesting concept futurebird, I like what you're doing at the moment.
Good development.
Caroline ;)

futurebird
07-20-2004, 02:00 AM
I worked on this one a little more. I scraped down the mirror with a razor since I think the gold leaf fluid was messing up the black... I also added some highlights.... better? worse?