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Anonymous
07-14-2004, 03:40 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-14-2004/46282_Good2_edited.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Untitled
Year Created: 2004
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 16 x 20
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
I'm new to the forum, and this is my first attempt at a portrait. Not sure if this is finished yet...

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Any constructive critisism would be greatly appreciated.

angela
07-14-2004, 03:47 PM
Welcome to the forumn!! The intent look on his face is awesome! and I really like how half of his face is in dark shadows....just one small thing though...how would it look if you softened the shadow on the bottom left to make it more consistent with the shadow on the top of his face? I like on the top part how the shadow fades into the flesh tones...Nice work.