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futurebird
07-13-2004, 09:00 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-13-2004/11505_chanel3.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-13-2004/11505_chanel2.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-13-2004/11505_chanel1.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: CHANEL (plein air... pain error?)
Year Created: 2004
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Watercolor Paper
Dimension: 10 inch wide
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
I did this two nights ago down on spring st. Did the final touch ups today.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
All comments welcome-- way to improve would be great too.

jerryW
07-13-2004, 09:01 PM
glad you stopped before getting too stiff.
next time maybe let the angle help set the mood.
this is no pain

futurebird
07-14-2004, 07:47 AM
next time maybe let the angle help set the mood.
this is no pain

How do you mean?

Michael-Ann
07-14-2004, 12:53 PM
Seems like a lot of symbolism going on here...the dark figure crouched elicits such sadness...the flower, well-lit and in plain view is beautiful, enchanting, but not for long, as it is a cut flower...who knows?

Could just be a thought-provoking image meant only to be taken simply at face-value. It is fantastic Futurebird.

haaf
07-14-2004, 12:57 PM
contradictions in real life
Caroline

futurebird
07-15-2004, 03:10 AM
Seems like a lot of symbolism going on here...the dark figure crouched elicits such sadness...the flower, well-lit and in plain view is beautiful, enchanting, but not for long, as it is a cut flower...who knows?

Could just be a thought-provoking image meant only to be taken simply at face-value. It is fantastic Futurebird.


Ah. Thanks so much this is what I was going for.

:)