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dornberg
07-13-2004, 08:29 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-13-2004/3105_zsk9.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: bar
Year Created: 2004
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 16x20 in.
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
rough

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
are planes destroyed?

jerryW
07-13-2004, 08:56 PM
the big and the small are sipping

wolvenp
07-14-2004, 12:32 AM
i think there needs to be some simplification of areas-massing.

Michael-Ann
07-14-2004, 12:44 PM
I wish you weren't so shy and would explain some of these questions you ask. When you say "planes" - is it color, shapes, objects, or all of the above perhaps that you are asking about? I want to know what to look for when you ask questions, unless it is okay to just express an uneducated emotional response and by chance convey something that you are looking for.

I see a 3-dimensional quality about "bar", although object definition (am I using this correctly - who knows??) seems to break down to the degree that I feel unsure about the depth.

Like the drips and the color bunches.

haaf
07-14-2004, 03:29 PM
yes, and I suspect on purpose
like re assembling a puzzle the wrong way, eventually it is better
Caroline ;)

Spyderbabe
07-14-2004, 04:01 PM
The gib guy on the left comes forward. The ladies are fine. I'm distracted by a big A tent in the middle.