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futurebird
07-07-2004, 02:21 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-07-2004/11505_tree.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Dead Tree
Year Created: 2004
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Watercolor Paper
Dimension: ten by fourteen
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This is a tree painted plein air.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
All comments welcome.

jonquil
07-07-2004, 03:06 PM
Just a question: what is the dark/black strip in the lower left hand corner?
It distracts the eye from the beautiful dead tree...

Gilberte
07-07-2004, 03:08 PM
A spooky tree trying to tell me something but I don't speak his language !
Special, disconnected but interesting.

Michael-Ann
07-07-2004, 03:36 PM
Wonderful! How did you like working En Plein Aire? I had to smile seeing a landscape posted by you...you are an intriguing woman. I like all your Van Gogh-ish brush work lots...and it does seem that the black strip detracts as it appears to be a much darker value than the rest...but is that so with the real work or just a digital thing?

bloodjelly
07-07-2004, 07:27 PM
I like the angle you've chosen for your P.O.V and the colors. My suggestions are to lighten up the black area as already mentioned, separate the dead tree more from the leafy background, and give it an indication of roots or contact with the ground. Is it easier for you to paint indoors or out? Anyway nice painting.