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jehoshephat
06-24-2004, 01:02 PM
This is the picture I drew of Daniela. She's the girlfriend of my venezuelan friend. I drew this for their anniversary, and they live in Caracas :| 28 dollars for shipping. Good thing he's paying me :). Anyway, please leave your comments (the second scan is dark and makes me want to throw up :|)

kasubram
06-24-2004, 01:42 PM
Wow ! .Great capture..

i thought secod one is a reference photograph.. :p !! Nice shading work !

:clap: :clap:
Karthi

Atrsy
06-24-2004, 01:52 PM
As far as the drawing goes, it's nicely done. I'm also glad to see that it's not a copy of copywrited work.

As far as the composition, I feel that the knees distract from the drawing and pull attention away from the face. If it were me, I'd crop those knees off or add more to the legs.

Don't be a slave to photos. You are talented enought to make changes if it will help your drawings.
Carol

JewelsMommy
06-24-2004, 02:04 PM
Is there a story behind Daniela's unusual pose? It's a wonderful drawing & I love the movement of the hair.

JM :music:

alfredart
06-24-2004, 02:07 PM
Very powerful drawing. The knees don't bother me but only add to the drama of the picture. Very well done.

Peace,AL

splashdog
06-24-2004, 04:12 PM
I love the power of this drawing and the unusual cropping. The knees add a wonderful living mass and the hands are really expressive. :clap:

tentativeartist
06-24-2004, 09:24 PM
I like the unusual pose also. :) Sounds like there may be an interesting story behind this as well. I don't think there is any reason for you to be nervous about posting! ;)

Tiffany

NatalieS
06-25-2004, 09:19 AM
OMG! This is incredible, I love the drama in this drawing! I love the fineness of the hair, and the knees are great!! As are the hands! I want this on my wall!

Whats the stort behind this? :clap: :clap: :D