View Full Version : a girl in the sunrise

06-17-2004, 05:50 PM

06-17-2004, 06:27 PM
Well my friend you are going top speed !!
this is a nice and soft job.--

--i hate saying 'but', so i will say, Only the mountains seem to be too flat that's what caught my eye at first sight -and am no authority in painting-

It's a nice and loving peace overall .


06-17-2004, 07:42 PM
Nice Andre,

This is the first time I saw to really critique something of yours though.

The mountains, which I took for a tree line, would look great with different shades of green in them. The lines on the mouth and eyes, well the face, I think should be smudged out to look like wisps of clouds, I just think they are to hard for this piece. I love the colors in the sky and her eyes, and a magnificent job on the water too!