View Full Version : a girl in the sunrise
06-17-2004, 05:50 PM
Well my friend you are going top speed !!
this is a nice and soft job.--
--i hate saying 'but', so i will say, Only the mountains seem to be too flat that's what caught my eye at first sight -and am no authority in painting-
It's a nice and loving peace overall .
06-17-2004, 07:42 PM
This is the first time I saw to really critique something of yours though.
The mountains, which I took for a tree line, would look great with different shades of green in them. The lines on the mouth and eyes, well the face, I think should be smudged out to look like wisps of clouds, I just think they are to hard for this piece. I love the colors in the sky and her eyes, and a magnificent job on the water too!
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