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09-26-2001, 12:19 AM

09-26-2001, 06:52 AM
a light blue thing - kinda like arms and legs - breaks up the rest which is coming togethr nicely. maybe a color between the surrounding ones is better.

09-26-2001, 08:32 AM
i think this is striking
you are obviously on a roll

a note on lines
i think that they can be dangerous
particularly in the hands of someone
like me BUT in your work
i find them completely integrated
they have a natural feel and belong
i would want to be certain of my direction
before i ditched them altogether

in this piece i think the lines charming

09-26-2001, 08:48 AM
striking is a good word :)

09-26-2001, 08:30 PM
this is from the one of the threads:
" the abuse of line only occurs when you forget that a line is a color area too. use freely like crescents triangles rects polygons etc. but try not to tangle up in them unless they are truly becoming subunits like Pollack(or Nathan Reed who does it amazingly well) then you build with tangle as the basic materielle."

Jerry thank you , I love reading your critiques, almost me feel like you are a teacher, LOL
I'm learning alot from what you say :)
As one of my teachers once said" Life is full of possibilites"
thank everyone:)

09-27-2001, 07:22 AM
nice play of reds blacks oranges
especially in the upper area
the lower has more contrast with white and black
which could be more subtle