View Full Version : Falling in love again

09-23-2001, 05:17 PM
Critique always welcome.


09-23-2001, 05:30 PM
emanating energy from the patterning
that seems quite symbolic
bold, assertive
interestingly interlocking quality of shapes

09-23-2001, 09:32 PM
{{damn it, my cam is broken again, and the last thing it would do was to get this picture with all the reflections of flash on my pc before going nuts again. *sigh*}}

fixed it. better now

thanks zotma for your view and encourage. This style is rather funny, yet more powerful than I thought.

09-23-2001, 10:46 PM
strong indeed!
almost peter max like.

09-24-2001, 02:36 AM
Really great poster stuff.

Reminds me of what we were doing in the late, late 50's
in school to elect high school officers.

Lets see what else you got?


09-24-2001, 06:31 AM
jerryW: Ah! Names! Input!
Checked this guy (never heard of him before), really interesting pictures. Thanks, Jerry.

Cleo: Thanks. Of this type of picture...nothing more. But this is certainly not the last.

09-24-2001, 07:50 AM
I love all the wiggly bits! Makes me wanna dance!


09-24-2001, 09:08 AM
it sot of embodies the youthfulness
of mind it takes to fall in love
i like it very much

09-24-2001, 04:40 PM
i think that these bright colored shapes
are quite balanced across the page

09-25-2001, 10:33 AM
artyhelen: This is good to hear. Most people in my student house apparently do not like it. Well, who cares... :)
impulse: This is very naive, yes. Hope I will remain naive, too.
dornberg: And may the balance be with you.

09-25-2001, 11:04 AM
looks as though you were inspired by cKa, cindy.

I prefer your other work, but if you like this, you better love it! :D

i feel obligated to explain a bit-

the white of the woman's shirt is too bright, and keeps draggin' my eye down and leaving it at the bottom, the black lines of the man's face and hair don't seem to have a strong link to the rest of the handling, also I wish for more squigglies in his skin colors- perhaps some of the yellow from the upper right quadrant to echo that color?

not that I'm suggesting changes, but just what's nagging at me about this one.

take care,

09-25-2001, 11:23 AM
i see what you mean...

I think I will keep the face,
but the hair is disturbing me, too.

I wanted the shirt to be very white in contrast of his black stuff... but I see this can distract.

I am not at home right now,
but I will check it when I get there.

Anyway, many thanks for many interesting suggestions.

Take Care,

09-25-2001, 11:24 AM
btw happy birthday :)