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Kashifa
09-19-2001, 05:08 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/19-Sep-2001/slide0001_image002.jpg

Please critiq. Its 20x24 on canvas.

jerryW
09-19-2001, 05:14 PM
very pleasant palette, and the larger shapes are pleasing too
the definition using white around bricks is a bit overdevelopped
so the rest of the painting suffers from this unballanced emphasis on architecture making the painting is too diagramatic and indicative.
on the other hand, the palms behind at the left are exquisite as are the shadows.
it can be brought up from interesting to amazing if it is made more evenly painterly as opposed to partly diagrammatic.

Kashifa
09-20-2001, 10:26 AM
Left pams are appears darker on screen. I ll try to set it little more. Thanks for your comments.

Cindy
09-21-2001, 08:55 AM
I find it utterly charming!

Cindy
09-21-2001, 10:18 AM
and I think the linearity enhances the effect