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okiltex
09-17-2001, 04:07 AM
This is for an assignment at my university, due this Thursday. We were supposed to start with an idea in our head and then communicate it clearly. Perhaps I've done so, perhaps not.

Regardless, please offer any comments you have on how I might improve composition, perspective, proportion, variety, dynamics/tension, contrast, content, shape, or anything else you see. Don't worry about my feelings with your comments; I know you're here to help me.

Also, what does the work make you feel? What does it communicate to you?

Since the photo was taken, I've fixed up the white shape of the left eye and something else that I don't remember.

Thanks for taking the time to view this and comment! I appreciate it very much.

Charcoal, 22x30 inches