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philwms
05-18-2004, 01:24 PM
http://www.mojoko.com/eza.luckylou/lucky.00_01.B.jpg

Jet
05-18-2004, 03:25 PM
Oh !
What a beautiful morning !!
Great for a new beginning !!

Looking good already..

Good luck

Regards

JCoop
05-18-2004, 03:47 PM
Phil, this is just wonderful! As soon as you get this book published, I'm buying one for my kid! Hopefully, I can get one signed by the author. :D

I know from experience that little kids take things literally... you might think about adding those sunbeams. :)

Phil, I'm really falling for your illustrations!

flowerfancy58
05-18-2004, 11:09 PM
Just darling!

gloria

justjean
05-19-2004, 12:01 AM
Phil, the kid in me loves it, the colours, the style of drawing and the setting
Looking forward to the next pages :clap: :clap: :clap:

luvlorn
05-19-2004, 02:59 AM
I really like the graphical treatment on this one. It activates the page nicely :)

SaraD
05-19-2004, 04:31 AM
I wish my kids could have that expression waking up in the morning :)
Lovely picture, lovely feeling... You just want to go up, up, up and away :clap:

Elvira
05-19-2004, 10:05 AM
I love it, but perhaps Joel has a point about the suns rays.
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