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Jet
05-10-2004, 12:03 AM
A Work In Pause...not in progress..
trying to learn to do the rest without photos.....


...http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/09-May-2004/27782-Rebecca-1.jpg..................http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/09-May-2004/27782-Rebecca-2.jpg



...http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/09-May-2004/27782-Rebecca-3.jpg...........................http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/09-May-2004/27782-Rebecca-4.jpg



........This is as far as i've got.....


Regards

flowerfancy58
05-10-2004, 12:39 AM
Well, it looks really good to me Jet:) I cannot get proportions just right myself, so I really can't critique it in any way!

gloria

themanda
05-10-2004, 10:44 AM
great start! good shape to her head, and her arms.

her legs look a bit off, though. seems like there should be a harder line on her shin, or something. her thigh is fine.

good work!

justjean
05-10-2004, 11:20 AM
Great work Jet , the only thing is her legs the shin part is to skinny and the knees are to round

Jet
05-10-2004, 11:24 AM
Thanks Gloria, Amanda, and Jean.
I can see that calf is off and i drew the foot upside down or so. :p

Yep, those knees are made of rubber or something ..lo
I'm gonna check her measurements for symmetry.

But i guess there must be a girl in the world that is similar to this one..

Or i'll do as Botero and draw only fat people, maybe it's easier..lol

Regards

DSPIT
05-10-2004, 11:25 AM
bodies can always be hard. Looks like you got a good start to me. Keep us posted if you can kick start your jet.

baquitania
05-10-2004, 04:46 PM
Jet:

Looks like it's going to be a fun piece... the upper torso is very nice, and I agree with everyone that the knees are too round and the leg abit skinny.
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/10-May-2004/3278-jets.jpg
I took the liberty of doing a side by side, where I place a skeletal outline in the drawing to see if the hips were right, as it looked a little straight to me, and evidently this girl has "back" ;)...

Anyway I did a correction of the leg, though I suggest you get a live model for that, as that's the only way to really tell... well I hope this helps...

Bobby

Jet
05-10-2004, 05:16 PM
Thanks DSPIT...

Sure did, thanks Bobby.....
Now the thigh makes a curve an ends forming a more 'square' knee... the shin rests flat on the 'floor'...and the calf has better shape as well...

Thanks...i'm learning a bit now..

.... and thanks god you didn't correct the 'back pack', cause i like it as it is ... :D


Regards

flowerfancy58
05-11-2004, 05:11 PM
Woo Hoo!! Way to go Jet, she looks great:)

gloria