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HomelyHoodlum
09-10-2001, 10:51 PM
What to work on? I don't have a picture to work off on this one. Advice?

-Rick


http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/10-Sep-2001/girl8.JPG

ArtyHelen
09-11-2001, 06:41 AM
Hi Rick!
What medium is this? Can't believe how well you're going with no pic to work from!
Just a couple of things that I can think of and notice:

The eyes look a little too 'outlined' and might be better a little smudged, particularly the bottom inner line.

Under her nose, you have two lines to indicate move from nose to top lip. I think this would be better as a single central smudge, indicating the hollow between nose and top lip.

Hairline - needs a little smudging and unevenness.

You have some great stuff going on on her right (our left) forearm. It looks a lot more 'tubular' than the rest of her limbs. I would like to see more of this shading, to indicate roundness, on the other arm and both shoulders.

Hope this helps a little!

Helen

jerryW
09-11-2001, 12:40 PM
stop, just do more like this.
excellent