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PETERH
04-30-2004, 02:49 PM
Maybe you're fed up of these sickening pictures! :D

I promise I'll try something calmer soon!

Anyway, your critique on this one would be appreciated!

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/30-Apr-2004/8730-Red_Supply_small.JPG

shrinkinviolet
04-30-2004, 03:43 PM
No Peter,
I may be a little green but never fed up. :evil:
Judy

PETERH
04-30-2004, 04:28 PM
Thanks Judy!

... but don't encourage me to do more! :D

Marty C
04-30-2004, 07:34 PM
Hi Peter,
Very nice work again but I do have one problem with this one. The boat is obviously struggling with high seas but the seas you have painted here seem quite low and not capable of throwing the boat around to this extent.

PETERH
05-01-2004, 02:03 AM
Thanks Marty - good comment!

As you see by the photo, I need to accentuate the wall of water in the foreground. It's definitely a large wave!

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/01-May-2004/8730-2.jpg

Diane Cutter
05-01-2004, 05:56 AM
Thanks for posting the picture.... I agree with Marty C that this definitely needs to have the water changed..... less chop, more uplifted water mass and lots of foam on the water to the left of the boat.

But... nice boat...

Diane

PETERH
05-01-2004, 01:51 PM
Thanks Diane!

maybe this is better?

(I've also had another crack at this, which I'll post in a separate thread).

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/01-May-2004/8730-Red_Supply_new_small.JPG

laudesan
05-03-2004, 12:11 AM
Beautiful Peter......

I never get sick of your work.....:)

PETERH
05-03-2004, 12:24 AM
Thanks Jj!

(I do, sometimes! :D )

ripvanblair
05-03-2004, 05:12 AM
This is a good series of paintings plenty of movement in them---------well done------Alan

Yax
05-04-2004, 06:04 PM
After spending a good bit of my life on the sea, I can relate to your paintings. This one demonstrates that struggle of the boat and the ocean. Yax

PETERH
05-05-2004, 09:07 AM
Thanks Alan & Yax!

It's fun to try and capture this movement and feeling!