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rsmak
09-08-2001, 06:32 PM
this is watercolor,please critique,thanks
rosanna

bottleman
09-08-2001, 06:53 PM
The image is a bit 'top heavy' in that the bright colours are almost all in the upper part. Either some brights have to come down to help balance, or the over all area of darks has to be increased(balance through weight).

Jan-Michael
09-08-2001, 07:03 PM
since it's an abstract I don't have a problem with it being "top heavy". I see it as a rose in bloom it will eclipse all that is dark...

LeeK
09-08-2001, 08:19 PM
it's perfect

dornberg
09-08-2001, 08:19 PM
these colors work very nicely

jerryW
09-08-2001, 08:48 PM
very nice

Impulse
09-08-2001, 09:15 PM
well done rosanna
a new area again
always exploring

Ceu
09-08-2001, 09:28 PM
really nice, wonderful abstract of a rose. :)

rsmak
09-08-2001, 10:23 PM
Originally posted by bottleman
The image is a bit 'top heavy' in that the bright colours are almost all in the upper part. Either some brights have to come down to help balance, or the over all area of darks has to be increased(balance through weight).

thanks,bottleman,
I will think about your advice on next project.

rosanna

rsmak
09-08-2001, 10:27 PM
jan-michael, leek, dornberg, jerryw, impulse, ceu:

thanks for your comments and support.
I appreciate that.

rosanna:)

quadros
09-08-2001, 11:40 PM
top heavy, perhaps a little. But I like it anyway.The fiery reds etc. are nice!

rsmak
09-09-2001, 12:00 AM
quadros,thanks.
rosanna