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pskardenni
04-05-2004, 04:59 PM
Hellow all of you
This is my first upload in abstract forum. I usually post in plain air, but now I feel that I have to paint somthing from my mind.
It is oil on canvas, 70 x 100 cm
Critiqe and comments are welcome

SanDL
04-05-2004, 06:19 PM
Hi Pol,
I'm having a difficult time making out the colors on my screen as well as seeing the surface.

I really like the entangled figures.

I'm distracted by the varying shades of black, from flat grayish to deep black in the line. My eye bounces from the figure back out to the surface. I don't feel like I can enter into the painting. This may, of course be the result of the digital image.

Clarifying figure and ground just a little more might help.

Gwenaelle
04-05-2004, 07:36 PM
I see Christ trying to get out of a coffin....

the face jump on me, and grab me to look at it more, really like it!

Tamana
04-05-2004, 08:08 PM
It's very interesting. An idea gestating around in the dark perhaps: a thought chrysalis of sorts.

And hellow and welcome to you.

arourapope
04-06-2004, 02:59 PM
It's kind of hard to see on my monitor, but this monitor is the height of crap. I like the entanglement and the positioning, though. Welcome to the basement. I hope you post more in here.

jnet11
04-06-2004, 03:50 PM
I enjoy this one too, I initially thought 'totem'

ordie4
04-07-2004, 05:35 PM
missed this one earlier.....

nice texture. love the
colors. welcome and
come back....

nine malic molds
04-07-2004, 11:30 PM
the colors seem so hearty and i get the impression of a hanging suicide.