View Full Version : What about this

04-05-2004, 04:59 PM
Hellow all of you
This is my first upload in abstract forum. I usually post in plain air, but now I feel that I have to paint somthing from my mind.
It is oil on canvas, 70 x 100 cm
Critiqe and comments are welcome

04-05-2004, 06:19 PM
Hi Pol,
I'm having a difficult time making out the colors on my screen as well as seeing the surface.

I really like the entangled figures.

I'm distracted by the varying shades of black, from flat grayish to deep black in the line. My eye bounces from the figure back out to the surface. I don't feel like I can enter into the painting. This may, of course be the result of the digital image.

Clarifying figure and ground just a little more might help.

04-05-2004, 07:36 PM
I see Christ trying to get out of a coffin....

the face jump on me, and grab me to look at it more, really like it!

04-05-2004, 08:08 PM
It's very interesting. An idea gestating around in the dark perhaps: a thought chrysalis of sorts.

And hellow and welcome to you.

04-06-2004, 02:59 PM
It's kind of hard to see on my monitor, but this monitor is the height of crap. I like the entanglement and the positioning, though. Welcome to the basement. I hope you post more in here.

04-06-2004, 03:50 PM
I enjoy this one too, I initially thought 'totem'

04-07-2004, 05:35 PM
missed this one earlier.....

nice texture. love the
colors. welcome and
come back....

nine malic molds
04-07-2004, 11:30 PM
the colors seem so hearty and i get the impression of a hanging suicide.