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this is for a friend of mine on commision, she wants me to do in bleach.
tell me what you think?
I' m having a hard time, so far I have added pencil to it to make the dark areas dark
09-01-2001, 12:55 AM
I don't get an image here... :(
09-01-2001, 12:56 AM
09-01-2001, 02:09 AM
can not help nor critic without an image,looking forward to it.
ps. I visited your art gallery,great work!
09-01-2001, 03:28 AM
Nope, I can't see anything either
me neither, so let me try this again.
09-01-2001, 03:36 PM
My favorite of yours to date! Very oriental in nature. Wonderful forms and dimension. S/he'll love it!!! :D:clap:
09-01-2001, 08:42 PM
I think your friend will be very pleased...
I too love the forms and dimension...
thank you, at this stage I think I have put too much detail, there is too much going on with the image. my next thing to do would be to start over again and make it simple and not so much detail?
09-01-2001, 10:23 PM
Just my opinion... don't mess with a GOOD thing...:)
bleach is a hard medium to work with and this is giving me second thougths
09-02-2001, 12:59 AM
there is so much movement
in so many directions
yet very delicately handled
without any jarring halts
very nice flow
i like this ceu
09-02-2001, 11:59 AM
Ceu...I do not think there is too much detail
an idea if this aspect bothers you
do not deminish the detail...
I see a maroon color in this piece
maybe just accent your main aspects of this piece
to draw attension to them with a maroon accent
it would go well with this green
as I see it here...
the flow is wonderful...
thanks I will try the maroon in it. thanks for making my mind at easy on the detail thing.
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