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Ceu
09-01-2001, 12:24 AM
this is for a friend of mine on commision, she wants me to do in bleach.
tell me what you think?
I' m having a hard time, so far I have added pencil to it to make the dark areas dark

Jan-Michael
09-01-2001, 12:55 AM
I don't get an image here... :(

Christie
09-01-2001, 12:56 AM
Me either...

rsmak
09-01-2001, 02:09 AM
can not help nor critic without an image,looking forward to it.

rosanna

ps. I visited your art gallery,great work!

Victor
09-01-2001, 03:28 AM
Nope, I can't see anything either

Victor....

Ceu
09-01-2001, 03:14 PM
me neither, so let me try this again.

Ceu
09-01-2001, 03:17 PM
3 part

Cindy
09-01-2001, 03:36 PM
My favorite of yours to date! Very oriental in nature. Wonderful forms and dimension. S/he'll love it!!! :D:clap:

giniaad
09-01-2001, 08:42 PM
I think your friend will be very pleased...
I too love the forms and dimension...

ginia

Ceu
09-01-2001, 10:10 PM
thank you, at this stage I think I have put too much detail, there is too much going on with the image. my next thing to do would be to start over again and make it simple and not so much detail?

Jan-Michael
09-01-2001, 10:23 PM
Just my opinion... don't mess with a GOOD thing...:)

Ceu
09-01-2001, 11:44 PM
thanks Jan-Michael,
bleach is a hard medium to work with and this is giving me second thougths

Impulse
09-02-2001, 12:59 AM
there is so much movement
in so many directions
yet very delicately handled
without any jarring halts
very nice flow
nice composition
i like this ceu

giniaad
09-02-2001, 11:59 AM
Ceu...I do not think there is too much detail
an idea if this aspect bothers you
do not deminish the detail...
I see a maroon color in this piece
maybe just accent your main aspects of this piece
to draw attension to them with a maroon accent
it would go well with this green
as I see it here...

the flow is wonderful...

ginia

Ceu
09-02-2001, 10:23 PM
thanks I will try the maroon in it. thanks for making my mind at easy on the detail thing.
thanks again.