Jill and Kittens

[bonnieatclassique]

MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/03-19-2004/39075_Paintings_006.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Jill and Kittens
Year Created: 2000
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 14x24
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Kids are fun

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Comment away

[JamieWG]

I smiled as soon as the painting appeared on my screen. Precious and charming. "Kids are fun" indeed---even the furry kinds!

Jamie

[Kent]

Bonnie,

This is a fun picture. The girl's right eye (the lower one) seems to have too much white showing--it goes all the way to the edge of her face. The mouth could be a little more detailed--a subtle indication of teeth, perhaps.

The kittens look very kitten-like, especially the one meowing on the right.

Cheers,
Kent

[bonnieatclassique]

Thank you for the comments. It always help to see from someone else's view. I have been painting for a long time but have been a lonesome painter not sharing with other artists. Thanks again. I needed your input. :D

[sugar tree gal]

Bonnie, I agree with both comments.. Welcome to Wet Canvas.. until I found this place I was a very lone painter, now just put your work on and you will learn so much.. I have anyway.. :clap: Janice

[Michael-Ann]

This is so cute! The kittens are adorable.

[bocote]

okay! the cat with mouth open next to foot is kick bootie. this is a handsome work. I'd want you to spend a little more time on key features here, but you've done very well with the cuteness factor.

I want a kitten now.

have fun

[nancyw]

"Look what I found, Mommy!" I laughed outloud when I saw this. The set up seems perfect (little kid posture is right on). As a cat person, I think you got the kittens just right. The only question I have is--Child's hairline seems a little too square or broad or something.

I would love to hang this in my house.

[jerryW]

the medium likes to be used like this

[bonnieatclassique]

:D Thanks for your reviews. I sure enjoy having people see my art work and sharing their ideas. You have encouraged me even more to paint more.

[hward]

Applause for kittens. The white space around them makes them look like they're glowing, but I like it.

Norman Rockwell was very good at drawing heads. You might look at or copy a few. He drew dozens or hundreds of skulls as a student.