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MissMouse
08-21-2001, 08:40 AM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/21-Aug-2001/TheDancesm.jpg
coolpix990 morning sunlight

phil_m
08-21-2001, 09:05 AM
I like that.

The composition is nice, fills the frame well, good separation from the background....

If you do digital retouching, I have 2 minor suggestions:
- fade out the 2 red lines to the right of the stalks at the bottom
- dodge the flower on the right slightly to reduce highlight/shadow contrast

...but it's really nice just as it is too.

MissMouse
08-21-2001, 09:12 AM
Thank you Phill. I will try your suggestion. I have been trying to get through the photoshop manual - what can I say :confused:

arlene
08-21-2001, 01:52 PM
i love it!!! thanks for leading me here...i don't mind the red cause i feel it leads your eye right into the flower...i'd personally leave it.

Leaflin
08-21-2001, 09:34 PM
Great title Miss Mouse.
For it does look like a dance :)