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ktbug
01-20-2004, 12:37 PM
How about this one's hair? Gee. I swear I can get better! *!* Well. I'll take ANY feedback. As of now, I'm fixing the lips. Something's wrong about them...I threw away the reference photo...so...Egh.

Smokindevil
01-20-2004, 04:07 PM
This is shaping up to be good ktbug!! As for the hair it looks to me like you have all the midtones in but, there are not enough darks, lights, and highlights. The lips are just a tad bit off. If you were to put a line down the center of them the left side would be shorter than the right (as you face the portrait). Can't wait to see the finished piece!!

Cloxboy
01-20-2004, 04:15 PM
Nice drawing, simple but effective. I agree with Smokin about the lips, they are off, like he said, just draw a line down the center of them and you'll see it. Increasing the contrast on this piece would help it a lot. Keep it up.

-Cloxboy