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rsmak
07-29-2001, 02:25 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/29-Jul-2001/by_the_lake.jpg


please critique,thanks.
rosanna

Ceu
07-29-2001, 03:03 PM
Rosanna, it's a wonderful view , specially the bottom flowers they are so alive, and the tree, is this water colors? or acrylics:clap:

giniaad
07-29-2001, 03:03 PM
composition is nice...
like the light behind the trees on the left...
like the detail on the flowers in the forground on the left...
like the water...not an easy thing to do...
like the blue flowers...adds interest and depth...

*need a little more of that detail in the peach colored flowers.
*a bit more work on the rocks, not such a hard line of dark on their top side.
*maybe a touch of definition on the mountains so they are not lost.

ginia

rsmak
07-29-2001, 03:06 PM
Originally posted by Ceu
Rosanna, it's a wonderful view , specially the bottom flowers they are so alive, and the tree, is this water colors? or acrylics:clap:

thanks,ceu.
yes it is watercolor.
rosanna

rsmak
07-29-2001, 03:08 PM
Originally posted by giniaad
composition is nice...
like the light behind the trees on the left...
like the detail on the flowers in the forground on the left...
like the water...not an easy thing to do...
like the blue flowers...adds interest and depth...

*need a little more of that detail in the peach colored flowers.
*a bit more work on the rocks, not such a hard line of dark on their top side.
*maybe a touch of definition on the mountains so they are not lost.

ginia

thanks,giniaad.
I agree with you.
rosanna

dornberg
07-29-2001, 06:57 PM
i like the three parrallel diagonals areas
could the purple mountain in back
also have been placed in a similar diagonal?

rsmak
07-29-2001, 07:13 PM
thanks,dornberg.I will try.
rosanna

ayzia
07-29-2001, 09:12 PM
beautiful colors rosanna!
i agree with ginia, more detail in the peach flowers. the yellow and white floral cluster in the foreground is just perfect.

i like it!

ayzia

rsmak
07-29-2001, 09:50 PM
thanks ,ayzia.
rosanna

Impulse
07-30-2001, 12:21 AM
masterful rosanna

wonderful colours

beautifully rendered

you are flying now.:clap:

rsmak
07-30-2001, 12:26 AM
Thanks,Impulse. you help me out a lot.
rosanna

rsmak
07-30-2001, 05:09 PM
I make some change, see if it is better or worse.

colorme
07-30-2001, 06:46 PM
rosanna, I like how it looks now :D

rsmak
07-30-2001, 06:48 PM
tnanks.pal!
rosanna:)

jerryW
07-30-2001, 06:55 PM
I liked the first one and the revised one is even better.

rsmak
07-30-2001, 07:09 PM
thanks,jerry.
rosanna

Impulse
07-30-2001, 10:22 PM
I like how you changed it.

I've come back to look a few times.

This really is excellent!

rsmak
07-30-2001, 10:25 PM
Thanks,Impulse.
rosanna

~*HC*~
07-31-2001, 12:38 PM
Nice at the beginning - beautiful now!
Well done for keeping at it and really making it come alive!

Christie
07-31-2001, 12:44 PM
You have an incredible talent. I love this picture!

rsmak
07-31-2001, 01:57 PM
Originally posted by ~*HC*~
Nice at the beginning - beautiful now!
Well done for keeping at it and really making it come alive!

thanks, HC.
rosnna

rsmak
07-31-2001, 01:58 PM
Originally posted by Christie
You have an incredible talent. I love this picture!

thanks,christie.
rosanna

JeanineJ
08-01-2001, 01:31 AM
WOW! Wonderful result!:clap: :clap: :clap:

rsmak
08-01-2001, 01:38 AM
thanks,jeanine.
rosanna:)