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nnelson1
10-23-2000, 07:41 PM
Watercolor 11x15 (Uncropped)

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My mother-in-law's crazy cat.
Excuse the "seam". The original is too big for one scan, so I tried to scan twice and paste together. Not as easy as it sounds. . .

Cheers!

Nick

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Gerak
10-24-2000, 01:27 AM
Lovely! I like the pose and those eyes. http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

Katee
10-24-2000, 06:53 PM
Nick

You have portrayed the inquisitive nature of the cat well, I can just imagine him knocking over the flowers in front of him and then scampering off.

I feel that the tulips/flowers behind him look as if they are growing out of his head or his b..., perhaps a slight change in composition of the picture would help.

Thanks for sharing it with us.

Karen http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/smile.gif

arlene
10-24-2000, 08:10 PM
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Hey Nick,
He is charming...I took the liberty of making some revisions...hope you don't mind.
1. I got rid of the flowers growing out of his head
2. Crop Queen strikes again!
3. I added more shading on the cat, to bring out the fur and define the cat more.
4. I added darks in the flower and the leaf to define it more.
5. I added stems to the vase and the shadow of the cat behind the vase.
6. I shaded the floor a bit more
7. And last I added more dark and highlights in the eyes.

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oleCC
10-24-2000, 08:35 PM
Your cat is adorable... and with the suggested changes from Arlene, think you will be really happy with this one. Keep painting and keep posting...you are on your way! http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/smile.gif
Carol

nnelson1
10-24-2000, 09:36 PM
Thanks, everyone, for your comments and suggestions. This was a bit of an experiment as I took the photo of Ollie on the table with all sorts of stuff behind him (tulip vase, coffee maker, another vase of flowers) and eliminated everything except what I found interesting.

KaTee: Yes, upon looking at him through your eyes, he DOES look like he has flowers growing out of his bum! Actually, I didn't bother painting in the vase that shows in the photo right behind him. Or maybe he's just a very unique cat! http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

Arlene: I don't have any problems with you "Photoshopping" my work; it helps to get as many different perspectives as possible. Appreciate the input! I noticed that, you too, desired a little more detail in his eyes. Have you been talking to my wife? http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/wink.gif

Carol: Thanks for your kind words and friendship. This is what makes WetCanvas such a great resource!

Cheers!

Nick