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Sue Galos
12-07-2003, 08:07 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-07-2003/23784_HPIM0248.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Untitled
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Watercolor Paper
Dimension: 11 1/2 X 15 1/2
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This is a piece I did for the Dec. 6 WDE and I feel it has possibilities, but am not sure were to take it - there is something not quite "there"

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
1. the foreground isn't resolved - do I need to make it stronger?
2. is the mountain range reading as off in the far distance? and how /what do I need to do with it?

the whole thing seems bland

TScottDove
01-02-2004, 03:17 AM
I don't see this as bland at all. The orange really pops.
The foreground makes me think I am on a balcony or something.
I'd leave this one as is.

jerryW
01-02-2004, 06:05 AM
Originally posted by TScottDove
I don't see this as bland at all. The orange really pops.
The foreground makes me think I am on a balcony or something.
I'd leave this one as is.
have to agree with that,
or
maybe de emphasize the left most dark mountain diagonal ( can that shadowed area be thinner?)

Wayne Gaudon
01-02-2004, 09:18 AM
MO .. the orange seems too intense and the mountain seems too hard edged but aside from that this is pleasing to the eye.