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NJean
11-26-2003, 10:35 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/11-26-2003/26397_Picture_141.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/11-26-2003/26397_Picture_140.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: sunrise after a light snow
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 16x20
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Looked out my southern window the other day and this is what I saw. I played with the computer image a bit just for fun.. The second is without adjustments

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
comments?

pero lane
11-26-2003, 11:15 AM
Can't really see the images very well here...first one is digitally distorted, second one is blurry. Anyone else? or maybe try another post?:)

Precious Mazie
11-26-2003, 11:31 AM
NJean...You have a very beautiful view out your window! I like how you handled the sun and the glow on the clouds around the sun. My concern in this picture is the direction of the shadows in relationship to the direction of the sun. If the sun is behind and to the left then the shadows should be going to the lower right corner of the picture. I think you handled the pine trees well. However the whole picture looks a little out of focus. Did you take the picture of the painting with a digital camera? They are hard to control I can't tell you how many pictures I have taken with mine that have come out out of focus. My suggestion here would be to setup your shot, take a deep breath and hold it then take the picture! This is a good effort please keep trying!

NJean
12-01-2003, 12:52 AM
I made some changes. Yes I did use a digital cam which is hard to get a good clear pic. Appreciate the comments.

Precious Mazie
12-03-2003, 06:30 PM
Yes I see! I think that this is better than the first! Keep up the good work!