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krillin
11-24-2003, 03:52 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/11-24-2003/31787_fremenn.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: fremen
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Pencil
Surface: Paper
Dimension: A5 size paper
Allow digital alterations?: No, please :)

MY COMMENTS:
A fremen from dune series. The original image was about 3*5 cm.s so it was difficult to see the details.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Your comments?

Manukarose
11-24-2003, 04:46 PM
Hi there - If your goal with this piece is to create a stark impact on us, you accomplished that well.

The shading is very well done also.

May I say that perhaps the subject demands more strength, more definition and a little more emotion.
He tells a story and I am not sure it's all being told in your sketch.

Well drawn though.

jerryW
11-24-2003, 07:28 PM
my guess is that stil suit manufacturing is not that far from reality.
Soon.
this illustration could be part of a sales brochure for the latest version.

really good job.

we could sell one to every member of every army - (who are the real fremen?)

missing here are spice and benegesserit oh, yeah and our worms are still too small.

Sylvielu
11-24-2003, 09:30 PM
Usually art doesn't scare me but this one is an exception.

oulric
11-24-2003, 09:36 PM
Well, well, well done... Is there some asymetry with your work, the right part of it is realy fascinating but the other: it lacks some humour, a bit robotic?

I like the punctuation, does it exist in the original one?

Waiting your works impatiently, there is some sense, is it?:p

krillin
11-25-2003, 06:18 PM
thank you everybody for your comments. Sylvielu, I'm glad that it scared you because it means that it's meaningful to you.
Jerry w, I can feed the worms if you need help. :D