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07-18-2001, 07:20 PM
Hi everyone..this is a simple painting I did..Please comment

07-18-2001, 07:39 PM
not too simple,
the leaf shaped trees are a motif it seems.
the busload of thunder clouds is very scary

07-19-2001, 08:01 AM
Oooh, very dramatic, ftb!

I love the opposites in this - the pretty, almost storybook bottom half, against the stormy rush of demons above!

I'm not too knowledgable about composition and when or why it works, but I feel you did a great job holding the two halves together with that green flourish at the very bottom.

Great! :clap:


07-19-2001, 11:25 AM
Interesting how trees convey feeling of calm before the storm.

07-19-2001, 12:51 PM
Thank you for your comments on this one..it helps me to know that I'm doing ok, sometimes I feel I'm not doing so well this really helps me.

07-19-2001, 07:26 PM
nice effect in the sky
nice perspective on the ground
they relate through a similar number of verticals

two different natures
could relate more
with some of the blue at the bottom edge
some of the pink and green reflected somewhee in the sky