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12-17-2019, 06:41 PM
This is a mixed media acrylic painting measuring 22 x 28. Any critique gladly welcomed. Thanks

12-17-2019, 07:21 PM
This is nice.
I think the red, grays, blues an white work well together but I'm not a fan of
the mustard color.

12-17-2019, 11:42 PM
I like the movement on this piece. Great palette, nice texture.
I was wondering why the teal bits were outlined, but that is by no means a criticism, just artistic curiosity. It adds visual interest and keeps the eye moving across the canvas.
A successful effort, for sure.

12-18-2019, 02:55 PM
Simply put I love everything about it...You balanced the textures and smoothness with a bold and soft mixing of values.

12-18-2019, 09:18 PM
I'd hang this on my wall in a heartbeat. Love all of it, colors, line, texture, and forms.

12-19-2019, 07:52 PM
I like the complexity of this. Lots to look at. And the colors are somewhat unusual but I like them.

12-20-2019, 09:46 PM
Lots of things to zoom in on and lead the eye! Really enjoy your color palette too. Maybe tone the yellow stroke that goes up to the top a bit. And like someone else commented..I'd hang it on my wall to enjoy!

Gloria Hopkins
12-22-2019, 05:11 AM
Solid composition. Works for me.

12-24-2019, 09:15 PM

Absolutely perfect!
I love the way each color works with the others.
as said, if i could, this would be perfect on any of my walls.
absolutely one of the best this best this year!


Ol' Don
12-30-2019, 04:37 PM
Wonderful painting. Fills the space with interesting colors and shapes. I could look at this a long time! Thanks for sharing.

12-30-2019, 10:12 PM
I really like it!

12-31-2019, 04:07 PM
It Wows me.

01-01-2020, 11:04 AM
Powerful blend of line and color.
My tiny crit is the boldness of the line in the upper right which pulls my eye out of the work.
Well done!

Hairy wolf
01-01-2020, 12:43 PM
Wow Again!!!

01-01-2020, 06:43 PM
Hi Sue -

This really resonates and gives a good feeling.


01-11-2020, 12:10 PM
Just great, compliments

01-26-2020, 02:49 AM
Good piece! Really affects me.