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pero lane
11-19-2003, 02:13 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/11-19-2003/19850_daily_news.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Daily News
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Board
Dimension: 11 X 14
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Just for fun...thought this was going to be simple, chair was a pain!! It's still a little wonky! Colors are pretty close.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Anything you've got...good or bad! Thanks!

Wayne Gaudon
11-19-2003, 04:04 PM
like the colors .. seems the feet have volume (3D) but the legs and chair don't .. would be better if all were flat or had volume.

later,

Dana Design
11-19-2003, 07:01 PM
I love the idea of this! Great shoes. Flatten the chair and it's finished!

Dana

mfoxmelanson
11-19-2003, 07:06 PM
Agree. I like the chair and the flatness. I love the colors- overall, nice impact!

M.

HRobinson
11-19-2003, 08:00 PM
This is a reach for you? Great idea, execution, color and technique and it looks hangable anywhere.

-Harry

jerryW
11-20-2003, 01:17 AM
i find it very hard to paint from memory

dornberg
11-20-2003, 10:23 AM
i like these shapes on the page

giniaad
11-20-2003, 11:08 AM
I think if you could uniform the width of the slats a bit better
this would benefit the piece

interesting, out of the ordinary, concept

pero lane
11-20-2003, 11:44 AM
Wayne...I see what you mean about the flat/volume issue. Just trying to see things from a different angle.:) Thanks!

Dana..Thanks!:)

mfoxmelanson...Thanks to you also!:)

Harry..Wow, thanks!:) Yes this was a little tough for me...keeping those vertical lines on that chair even was a nightmare!!:D Not perfect but I have all the time in the world to work it out. Thanks again!

Jerry...so do I!!:D

Dornberg...thanks for looking in! I so much like your work and I guess if I could "see" as you do my problems would be over!:)

ginniad... I was really trying to see if I could get all of the darn things the same size!:D This was just a little fun experiment! Thanks!!:)