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Alterghoul
07-11-2019, 02:43 AM
Hey guys! I am new at this forum. So I'd like to ask you, what do you think about my portrait in progress. I do not need any appreciation, I would prefer a lot of criticism instead. Thank you!http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/11-Jul-2019/2198929-20190711_084150.jpg

Tipo
07-12-2019, 03:13 AM
You have all the basics covered, good placement of features and you have dealt with the dappled and reflected light well. To take it to the next level I would start working from life to improve your drawing skills and observation. Working from life will also free up the drawing and allow you to explore the person.

Tipo

Alterghoul
07-12-2019, 06:32 AM
Oh thanks. Just was thinking on starting a good drawing practice during the summer. Hopefully I will reach "the next level"😀

Humburger
07-12-2019, 09:07 AM
Can you give details? Paper? Medium? Size? 😀. Would you be able to show the reference, if you used one?

Wassie
07-15-2019, 03:21 PM
I would like to see the reference if you have one.

Gav
07-25-2019, 09:25 AM
Maybe soften the background if you can. I might be tempted to put more details in the hair but it depends what you want to emphasize.