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MALARKEY
09-09-2000, 04:44 PM
11x14 watercolor ... not all of it scanned. Thanks for looking, Sandy<IMG SRC="http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/User/calm.JPG" border=0>

Katee
09-09-2000, 06:17 PM
Sandy

Your watercolours just keep on improving.

I'm not sure which part of the picture didn't get scanned, IMHO I feel that the composition of the painting would be better with the large trees at the front right hand side moved over to the left.

But it may be that something is there, but wasn't scanned.

Nice speaking to you in the chat room the other night, sorry I disappeared suddenly, I got 'cut off' and then couldn't get back in.

best wishes

Karen http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/smile.gif

Gerak
09-10-2000, 05:42 AM
Mal - how beautiful ! Your water and your trees......I wish I could paint as you !
These water can speak!

sassybird
09-10-2000, 02:18 PM
You are really moving with these watercolors, Mal. I am amazed at your growth. You go girl!!

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sass

PhilipNGa
09-11-2000, 12:19 AM
real nice painting Mal, very relaxing, makes me think of looking from a hill or mountain top over treetops to get my bearings on my main goal..... fishing, lol
phil

Phyllis Rennie
09-11-2000, 08:07 PM
Hi Mal, Nice colors and textures. If it were mine, I'd add a few (not too many) fine, dark lines. Maybe one at the edge of the water where it meets the land. And a few in the trees to strengthen the trunks and branches. Phyl