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ZeichenbloQ
12-13-2018, 04:09 AM
hello again,

I've drawn an abstract bird with lots of ornamental patterns and hope for some comments on this one. thanks :)http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/13-Dec-2018/2100397-Paradise_Lost_-_ZeichenbloQ.de.jpg

pedlars pen
12-13-2018, 11:17 AM
For me this one does not work as well as the carp did.
The carp worked better for me because you used more heavy blacks , & they were distributed around the drawing in a balanced way.
That gave the drawing, 1. More clarity & 2. more impact , it was more clear & powerful overall for it.
Mike

Charlie's Mum
12-13-2018, 12:06 PM
I like this very much!
The composition has a good flow to it and I like the rhythm of shapes and line.