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cliff.kachinske
02-22-2018, 03:50 PM
Haven't posted here in a while, but this seems like the right forum for this piece. Thanks for any comments.

17 X 8.5 in. acrylic on paper.

Please share your thoughts.

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/22-Feb-2018/1965263-lion_head_wip.JPG

cmallav
02-22-2018, 04:52 PM
Gorgeous colors! Somehow I feel it needs a little more work. However I love the blending of colors you have going on in the sky

KreativeK
02-23-2018, 09:37 AM
A stunning seascape or landscape!

jimwhalen
02-23-2018, 10:00 AM
I agree with Chaya, interesting colors, but it looks incomplete.

Trier
02-23-2018, 11:54 AM
Attractive colors and composition to me, but I agree with Chaya and Jim.

Regards,
Trier

La_
02-23-2018, 12:04 PM
seems dim, like there wasn't enough natural light to really capture it well

la

Katie Black
02-23-2018, 12:13 PM
I love your colour mix, it's a strong bold landscape.

however, the sky and the land are equally strong and so I think maybe the sky needs to take more of a back seat.

cliff.kachinske
02-24-2018, 12:58 AM
Chaya, Jim, Trier, I agree completely. The colors are pretty much working. The unfinished look is there, I think, because it's all knife work to this point. Some of the color mixing seems to be working but a lot of the marks are the generic bad knife marks I make if I'm not careful.

Kay, thank you. I think the colors and overall composition are strong.

La, maybe all that red in the foreground makes it look dim, along with that purplish mass at the very bottom. Thanks for taking the time.

Katie, interesting observation. Kind of gives me a fresh outlook and I appreciate that. Thanks. The upper two-thirds of the painting started out yellow and the lower part magenta. Probably need to mediate a little more with blue.

Eraethil
02-24-2018, 03:00 AM
Another fan of the colour scheme - unusual and bold. If you are thinking of continuing with it, the value composition is where I'd focus next. The range is not narrow enough to have a minimalist vibe, but not broad enough to provide a strong/exciting contrast. But I suspect it doesn't need much change, as the hue contrasts are quite bold.

cliff.kachinske
02-24-2018, 02:01 PM
Thanks, Rick. Yes, I'm continuing with it. The biggest change is the water is now mostly blue - conventional, I know, but our visual conventions exist for a reason.

I think I'm close to the 'don't screw it up now' phase.

cliff.kachinske
02-26-2018, 04:51 PM
First, thanks to everyone who supplied C&C on the WIP. Close to being done - maybe contemplating more work on the water. I'll know better after a couple of weeks.

About 8.5 X 17 in. on paper. I see there's a little strip of the mounting tape on the right edge. Please ignore.

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/26-Feb-2018/1965263-lion_head_progress.JPG

Artchrispy
02-26-2018, 04:57 PM
This is really beautiful. Great format. The water really seems to reflect the colors in the sky. If you are going to work on the water maybe reflect some more of the sunset red in the water. Well done. Looks like late summer.

Boafamily
02-26-2018, 05:33 PM
The bright colors and shimmery movement to this piece really set the mood and make it a joy to view.

birdhs
02-26-2018, 05:51 PM
Do I think this too abstract and needs to better portray reflected colors on the water's surface ?
OR
do I like the abstracting of reality as indicated by the striking and bold colors?

That is always my predicament with abstracts based on reality.

on this one, I lean more to liking the abstract side, I love the blue, even if it is not "real". The entire painting has a feeling of playful choosing of colors, a happy piece of art , reminiscent of the mood of the place, rather than an attempt to modify reality.

very good piece IMHO.

greggo

cliff.kachinske
02-27-2018, 09:34 AM
Chris, Anthony, Greggo, thank you for the kind comments.

A painting is never really done as long as I can get my hands on it.

Eraethil
02-27-2018, 10:09 AM
A painting is never really done as long as I can get my hands on it.

:lol:

Excellent stopping point! (or finish, depending...:angel:)

cliff.kachinske
02-27-2018, 11:44 AM
:lol:

Excellent stopping point! (or finish, depending...:angel:)

:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

KreativeK
02-27-2018, 11:46 AM
This one moves me. Looks finished.

Katie Black
02-27-2018, 02:35 PM
Very nice indeed.

cliff.kachinske
02-27-2018, 06:49 PM
Kay, Katie, thank you for the comments.

bvanevery
02-28-2018, 01:04 AM
Nice color and texture.

cliff.kachinske
02-28-2018, 03:44 PM
Thank you, Brandon.

Trier
03-04-2018, 02:18 PM
Dramatic improvement IMHO!

Great colors and it has an ambiance that is strong and pleasing. I like it.

BTW, how did you manage to get the word "UPDATE" added to the title after it originally appeared? I wanted to do this several times, but couldn't figure out how.

Regards,
Trier

cliff.kachinske
03-04-2018, 02:57 PM
Thank you Trier.

I started a second thread with the word "Update" in the title. I think a forum moderator merged them. Moderators have magical powers.