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Artchrispy
02-04-2018, 01:17 PM
Latest Alcohol ink on Yupo 11x14.

I m not liking it so I tried to changed hues in photoshop to see if my problem is in the composition /subject or color. Any crits/ comments welcome

Original:
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/04-Feb-2018/131690-small.jpg

Changed Hue in Photoshop:
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/04-Feb-2018/131690-smallaltcolor.jpg

Changed Hue in Photoshop:
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/04-Feb-2018/131690-smallaltcolor1.jpg

Grey:
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/04-Feb-2018/131690-grey.jpg

Details:
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/04-Feb-2018/131690-small1.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/04-Feb-2018/131690-small2.jpg

Eraethil
02-04-2018, 02:48 PM
I'm liking it. Interesting shapes, textures and a lovely gradation.

The only thing I can imagine that would make you think it isn't quite working is that there are two "objects" to look at. The red/violet eye and the tentacles at the top. That sets up a bit of a competition for the eye to bounce between two areas, which sometimes doesn't work. But I wouldn't suggest changing it.

I think two things makes it work for me: First, the tentacles are spread along the arc, so the secondary focus is a large area, and second, the large circular pour has such a beautiful gradation from deep rich darks to luminous lights.

Cool stuff!

KreativeK
02-04-2018, 03:17 PM
I like any AIs no matter the technique or application. Great assessment, Rick! Definitely cool, Chris!

cmallav
02-05-2018, 08:32 AM
I like this a lot. I have no suggestions for improvement. The colors and hues are great as well!

laf.art
02-05-2018, 09:24 AM
So what is your preference from the hue changes? Personally I like the original colour and think it has a good balance, I keep going to the viewers top left corner where there's a sort of silhouette which intrigues me

Laurelwood
02-05-2018, 12:32 PM
I like the original colors - beautiful combo of teal and violet. I think possibly the only negative for me is the fact that it's so centered. But that's just nitpicking. Had you not said anything, I probably would have not even noticed that.

Katie Black
02-05-2018, 01:20 PM
I actually like all of it! and wouldn't:thumbsup: change anything.

jimwhalen
02-05-2018, 01:55 PM
I like it just the way it is in the original form.

Boafamily
02-05-2018, 03:01 PM
The original one is perfect just as is...

Artchrispy
02-05-2018, 06:18 PM
Thanks everyone. I think the colors in the first one seem too familiar , like overdone. I think my mom had a 1980's vase with the same finish :)
The other problem is that one of the competing centers of interest isn't that interesting. A center of interest needs to be interesting :)
I think I like it in grey the most , it has a weird sculptural quality. Anyway, thanks for your comments, crits and insights!