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michaeljarman
06-04-2017, 10:04 PM
I convinced my wife to let me paint and post this portrait of her. Still working on it.. C&C welcomed! 😊

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/04-Jun-2017/1981071-IMG_2563.JPG

catweazle
06-05-2017, 04:52 AM
Nice,:clap: like it a lot. I'm not sure it needs more.
Eric

Moises Menendez
06-05-2017, 05:56 AM
Great work. My suggestion is to work on the background on our right. The small white spot could go bigger to let the profile be more apparent.

water girl
06-05-2017, 02:38 PM
I don't feel this painting needs much more attention. It is quiet, soft and intimate. Well done!

michaeljarman
06-05-2017, 09:01 PM
Thanks Eric, Moises and Karen for your input and feedback! 😊

Donna T
06-06-2017, 10:26 AM
A beautiful portrait done with sensitivity and a quiet, thoughtful mood. I admire the way you barely suggested her left eye and eyelashes. A photo would have shown this area in sharp detail but the way you have portrayed it works wonderfully.

Charles Perera
06-06-2017, 11:49 AM
I too like it as it is. It is simple soft and cosy.

Charles

michaeljarman
06-06-2017, 08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Donna and Charles! 😊

michaeljarman
06-06-2017, 08:02 PM
Refined a bit more... The photo turned out a bit cooler...

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/06-Jun-2017/1981071-IMG_1086.JPG

Luke Taft
06-07-2017, 11:44 PM
I love it. Just for the requested C&C (not that I could pull it off- you are awesome), The jaw pulls my eye. Maybe a little softer?

michaeljarman
06-09-2017, 09:41 AM
Thank you, Luke! I'll consider that indeed. :)

Divasin
06-11-2017, 09:08 AM
Beautiful and atmospheric...she must be pleased!

michaeljarman
06-21-2017, 10:33 PM
Thank you so much, Leslie! Yes, I think so. 😊😊